Last week Mrs Cutler gave us a task to do a poem by William Carlos William. but not any poem a poem of something we had to confess and the thing you needed to confess could been when you were a baby or maybe yesterday. we started but had to remember to use the same words William did to start the sentences and after writing the poem we had transfer the writing on a slide , then we added a image for the background but the image had to be linked to our poem.Then we finished, I think I did a successful poem but i would change some words to a higher level of writing.
Great work Lucy I liked your description and vivid detail and your topic was a great choice. I liked how you added the process of the poem.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Lucy I liked your description and vivid detail and your topic was a great choice. I liked how you added the process of the poem.
ReplyDeleteThat confession was pretty funny. I liked the vocabulary you used for your poem. Next time you could try expand your vocabulary to use more in depth words?
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ReplyDeleteGreat work Lucy!
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