powerful paragraphs!!

Lately we have been doing powerful paragraphs, This is basically its when we get a picture of something than we write a detailed paragraphs based on the picture. When we write the paragraphs we have to remember to use punctuation  and cops and mims and similes and metaphors if we want to make it better. we can write as the person or whats gonna happened.  We usually get about 10 minutes to write and when were done writing. We share our paragraphs to the class to see how other  people would put it . We will do this in the morning as a  warm up before our contracts. we have done 3 in the last week. Here is one of mine.

This the picture of this powerful paragraphs

looking out of the clear white tent and seeing the sunrise behind the bear brown tress. A brown floor and grass green as mint spots,. hearing the birds singing and the wind whistling makes this the perfect  view.